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Pink Champagne

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I am really enjoying this photography project! I get to learn camera techniques, and bake!

I WOULD LOVE A CRITIQUE ON THIS PLEASE!

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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

well fist off don't be discouraged by my rates because you are a beginner and good pictures come with practice.
the photo seems too symmetrical and it needs more flow (maybe more variety in objects in the background or on the cupcake itself) . the technique is pretty much a closeup so there's not much to discus on that other than it was well executed but its pretty simple with a straight over view, i would of liked to see it at a more complex angle ( try playing with the angles). the colors are really nice i like that you didn't overwhelmed the picture with too much pink (as many tend to do). i hope this helps you and ill look forward to your following works.